thanks melody....i m late but went to mumbai this weekend was with sunder and the elder one ....had a nice time .

love
namita

thanks a lot melody queen.....it was really nice having you here....pls do keep coming...though i know im too irregular myself...
regards
sunder

Hello Sundar
Beautiful tribute to your wonderful wife. I like the last stanza especially.

Namita
Wish You Many More Happy Returns Of The Day

Regards

thank you very much MU.....
thanks a lot sootradhar......for the beautifully worded compliment....i'm priveleged to have you here...
regards
sunder

Sunder ji....

Kawita ke sahabd aur kawita ke bhaav kawita par itane bhari hain ki kawita par dhyaan hi nahi jaata khaas taour par tab jabki maloom ho ki kawita likhne wala gair hindi bhashi hai.....
....Aakhiri chaar lines kawita ka poora saar bayaan karne ke liye kaafi hain....

"TUMHAARA JANMDIN
KITNA TUMHAARA, KITNA HAMARA
RISHTE NIBHAYE BINA
BHALA KOI KAISE JAANE..."

Kuch-kuch tao kawita se jaan gaye hain....Isliye Aap Dono logon ko Janm-din Mubaarak !

Shootradhaar !

Mr Iyer

It was so nice of you to have penned a poem for Namita ji. I esp liked these lines --
'chidiyon ki udaan,  titliyon ki thakaan, padaav paaye bina koi kaise jaane ' and the expression 'khud ko khoye bina'.... and of course, the last eight lines.

I hope Namita ji would enjoy this day well with all of you. And here's wishing the two of you a long and blissful married life. Thanks for posting the link to this blog. Cheers and Regards.

thank you so much nupur for those lovely comments....
regards
sunder

Sunderji

This is a beautiful poem...simple elegance....

TUMHAARA JANMDIN
KITNA TUMHAARA, KITNA HAMARA
RISHTE NIBHAYE BINA
BHALA KOI KAISE JAANE...


I loved these lines...they sum everything..every feeling...there can be

Happy Birthday again to Namita.

Nupur

thanks a lot yash......
in fact peotry brought us together...
regards
sunder

thanks a ton muthu for visiting....my privelege....
regards
sunder